Brixton Brewery/Bowie/BFI Competition

I've had my graphic design hat on this week working on this little design for a Brixton Brewery/Bowie/BFI competition. I went for Berlin period Bowie, Hence the name "Helden" [German for Heroes] and took the "I wish, I wish you could swim. Like dolphins, like the dolphins can swim" line as my cue for a "fun design" [as the brief said] as there isn't a lot of fun on any of the Berlin period albums! Let's see how I fare this time. I didn't do so well when i entered the Pressure Drop Brewery competition a couple of years ago.